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I stared out the window of my family's car. We were going to visit a family called the Ladon's. They were a very rich family and mine was invited to their mansion for some odd reason. It was just me, my mom Dahlia, my dad Nick, and my oldest sister Lucy who hates me. My other older sister (who is my twin) couldn't make it because of my brothers. Who am I you may ask? My name is Belinda Savannah and I'm 16 years old. I don't know it yet, but this trip was about to make my life change course.
When we got there, there was a white and black mansion with solid silver gates and fences. There were gardens with the most beautiful flowers and amzing hedges, with fountains to seal the deal. My father who was driving pressed the buzzer and said "Hello. This is Nick Savannah of the Savannah family. You've invited us to come here." For a few seconds, there was silence. Then the gates opened and my dad stopped when he saw a valet man you usually see at fancy restaraunts. I'm pretty sure that was illegal, but my dad stopped the car and gave the keys to him.
Before we walked out, Lucy looked at me. "If you see any cute men, tell me." she told me. She was 17, but she was already so bossy and bitchy. She tells me that she can do whatever she wants because she's older, but my parents never saw this. I wanted to tell them so badly about her behavior. I can't because I'm supposed to be happy and cheery, like the sun.
What do you guys think so far? May I please have long critiques please?
This is based off of the dream I had:
I had this dream...I just woke up from a nap but... I had this dream... I was with my family, and we were driving in a car to a mansion that belonged to a rich family. I was bored out of my mind and depressed because my stepsister couldn't come. And it felt like my family forgot about me...Then I jumped off of the mansion roof and then... The mansion family's son Karmichael saved me. He had a black dragon aura and I formed a golden Phoenix one. He said to me "Hang on!" and then we flew back up. He then kisses me, and then I found myself in fancy royal clothes as a young adult with me and my family living in Karmichael's family mansion... As Karmichael's engaged lover! And then I woke up...
What does this mean?!?!
A Warning About a Horrible Person
Hey everyone. I’d like to warn you all about a user who has been harassing my friends and many others for a while now. The user is known as Infamous-Verdesauce, and she has been doing a lot of horrible things, to the point where I can’t keep track of all she’s done. My friend Krismax001 has posted a lot of evidence as to what she has said and done, such as harassment, threats, doxxing, and scamming. His doc of the evidence is here https://docs.google.com/document/d/14PZszWUXxOEwdcRUp1T8atJwtIoM5VfEw7AyNSdUFiA/edit and you can also check out WellingtonNZPD for evidence they have posted as well of all that is going on. Just a warning for the doc, if you don’t have the Google Docs app, you may have to switch to desktop mode or a laptop. And another warning, if you do get harassed or spammed by Infamous-Verdesauce, just block her. She’s done so much damage for about 3 years, and she may have done this for more.
Looking to commission!
Hello! I’m looking for someone that can do the Yu-Gi-Oh art style. I wanna commission some art with my OC Angel. ^^
Commissions open!
Hello! I recently opened up commissions, and basically the short summary of it is I am having some money troubles. https://twitter.com/kksparks2/status/1573159318505295872?s=46&t=t7GbcCLMDpREyxecN_dq-w Any RTs are highly appreciated!
I have made a Legend Warriors playlist!
Basically, I have made a Legend Warriors playlist consisting of songs from the series each multiverse takes place in, along with some hypothetical openings for Legend Warriors if it was an anime!! Feel free to offer suggestions, but my one rule is no fan made themes, unless they're covers like Samuel Kim's. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1RgMpWISvIs&list=PLPwAfxDFaa2Q3m9otTytyJ0EQGhUcmFSV
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I really like it. Since you ask for someone to critique then I will try.... I recommend you to keep one tense (present tense, past tense, future tense) Thats all I actually got